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just some practice

pls critique 
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The style here is original and a bit uncommon. I like the colours and the play of light.
But.. the big problem here is the texture. The light reflection does not really seem like it. It looks more like a police-tape for me, so i just get a bit frustrated. And there is the thing: where goes hair -- there go the lines. The geometry here does not really go well with the naturalism and harmony or the drawing.. At least for my vision.
Another thing is -- i'd recommend shading all around the face (the amount here is okay, but one of the corners was left out) so the geometry lines would not cross with it.

However, i like the figure(model?) of the hair, it's outline. It's very cute.